Raptor Jesus... Is that you?
All joking aside, decently done in my opinion. Once you polish up some it could be even better. Keep working on the voice over/lip syncing of the character and try to keep it a little more fluid. It seemed like you were skipping around on ideas when you made certain parts. Like how the Raptor attack just kinda ended without much substance.
Hey there. Thanks for the critique. Yeah I was jumping around to different spots when making this, trying to make it all fit together, which I now realize leaves some spots hanging with no context. Next time I'll try to make a more concise plan. Thank you.
I am a New Newgrounds Voice Actor trying to get out there.
Age 32, Male
Overlord
The University of Awesomesauce
Fredericksburg
Joined on 10/11/11
Monster Fruit 